Lynocide the lovely

Rookie - 0 Points (03/03/1995 / daytona beach, florida)

Love - Poem by Lynocide the lovely

it makes you laugh
it makes you smile
it kills
it lives
it made me laugh
it made me smile
it killed me
it breathed new life in me
it made me see who's real who's fake
you did that
you made me laugh and smile
you killed me and brought me back to life
when i look at myself now i feel pretty and
i don't see the faults anymore
we; re not together anymore but
you still treat me the same
maybe even a little better.
you are love, my love
i found the reasons to try it again
yes you helped me do that
thank you we'll always be friends
i promise no matter what! ;)


Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

i dedicate this to you Bobby B
I'll never meet 'someone like you' ever again.

Comments about Love by Lynocide the lovely

  • Abdallah Gamal (5/8/2012 4:03:00 PM)

    So beautiful and amazing writing, your imagination put beautiful impress about the poem, in addition choosing the suitable and perfect words, I like it. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 21, 2014

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