Love Poem by Phurpa Wangdi

Love

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your knife like words
pierced through my heart
to pieces its all shattered
its so suffocating
i live but in hell

you promised me lots
but lied through your mouth
life is no game
you lied again
you are but a player

i have lived my life
searching for my heart
when at last i found it
you say its over
my world came down hard.

Sunday, August 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 30 August 2015

a very heart touching poem expressing the pain of a lover's broken heart.. thank you

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 30 August 2015

we love but sometimes in return we get but pain.nice poem indeed.

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Rahman Henry 12 February 2020

Splendid one. Thanks to share with us, dear poet!

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 October 2018

when at last i found it you say its over my world came down hard. love is a mystery.. sadness because of lack of faithfulness creates lot of pain. Without truth there is no relationship...... a fact which u hve written in yur poem.. thank u. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2015

Love and hate had been the ways of mankind ever since. Nice work.

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Nima Tshering 13 September 2015

very sad....emotional poem....i feel for you phurpa....

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

An emotional poem, Phurpa. I wish you peace and happiness

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