Love Poem by Saba Izadi

A good start with a nice poem, Saba. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

you express your emotions very well darling, but you did write in mess. categorize your lines and write them in row. meanwhile be observer of punctuation and capital letters. waiting for your more poem...be good

Your poem is full of love..a tiny poem but you have magnificently articulated love for your lover

I'm here to paint you with all of my heart Without you I'm like a bird with no wings in simple and short lines you express such a great love and emotions. desire, wishes........thank you for this poem dear poetess.. tony