Don't be Hopeless Don't be worriedI'm here to paint you with all of my heart.I wait until sun rises in blue and dreamy sky Be in my cold and dirty lifeWithout you I'm like a bird with no wings
you express your emotions very well darling, but you did write in mess. categorize your lines and write them in row. meanwhile be observer of punctuation and capital letters. waiting for your more poem...be good
Your poem is full of love..a tiny poem but you have magnificently articulated love for your lover
I'm here to paint you with all of my heart Without you I'm like a bird with no wings in simple and short lines you express such a great love and emotions. desire, wishes........thank you for this poem dear poetess.. tony
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I would like to translate this poem
A good start with a nice poem, Saba. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.