Dillip K Swain

Gold Star - 308,306 Points (14 Aug,1969 / Jamphar, Machhagaon)

Love

Poem by Dillip K Swain

Your sterling love
Is like a gigantic sponge
That absorbs the fountain of my pain
Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
To withstand violent storms
Cyclonic waves and all disasters
Prompting me to climb mammoth hills
Sans soreness, pains and perils

It's your pure love
That sparks emotion
For - I dive into the ocean!

Copyright @Poet,25 January,2019

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Love by Dillip K Swain

  • Robert M SmithRobert M Smith (7/26/2020 7:30:00 PM)

    Love is never to be forgotten. It must be remembered everyday. Well constructed and executed.(Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (6/23/2020 7:43:00 AM)

    Passionately and movingly penned is this awesome creation of yours.
    A heartwarming love poem that resonates with the soul.
    Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece, Dillip.(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/4/2020 9:39:00 AM)

    It's your pure love
    That sparks emotion
    For - I dive into the ocean! . beautiful expressions of love. than k you dear poet Dillip. tony(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(6/4/2020 6:34:00 PM)

    I sincerely appreciate such a lovely comment dear friend! I am thankful to you!

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  • Harindhar Reddy (4/8/2020 8:08:00 AM)

    Wow, love has the power to heal anything. It can deal any pain. Love words flowed with genuine feelings, truly appreciable work.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(4/8/2020 10:08:00 AM)

    A great comment dear poet! A million thanks to you for visiting and commenting!

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  • Anjandev Roy (3/29/2020 12:46:00 PM)

    the fountain of my pain.......remarkable piece......sir. anjandev roy.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(4/5/2020 10:00:00 AM)

    Thank you so much dear Anjandev for this precise appreciation! Stay blessed!

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (2/26/2020 3:22:00 AM)

    Love has such miraculous power! It emboldens and inspires one to take up super human activities! It imparts confidence and delight. The very thought of someone loving us sincerely boosts up our energy level and we will get the strength to overcome all obstacles on our way! An admirable poem of great depth!(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(4/5/2020 9:58:00 AM)

    Such a great appreciation dear madam! I am extremely happy! I am grateful to you. Stay always happy and blessed!

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (1/24/2020 12:16:00 AM)

    I express my sincere thanks and regards to all esteemed poets and well wishers for their beautiful comments that have inspired me a lot!(Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (1/17/2020 5:15:00 AM)

    Passion is in the turmoil on ocean's surface, the waves that can be violent.
    For true love one must dive deep, the deeper the better.
    Marvellous poem writ with a beautiful pen.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(6/4/2020 6:33:00 PM)

    A great comment sir! I am grateful to you

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  • Anjandev Roy (1/1/2020 12:42:00 PM)

    Such a fantastic write. Thank u, Sir. anjandev roy.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(1/16/2020 11:05:00 PM)

    A million thanks to you dear Anjandev for visiting and commenting! Stay always happy and blessed!

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (12/13/2019 4:33:00 AM)

    I express my sincere thanks and regards to all esteemed poets for their beautiful comments that have inspired me a lot.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(4/5/2020 9:55:00 AM)

    A meticulous review sir! I am always grateful to you!

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (12/13/2019 4:03:00 AM)

    A short and beautiful poem sir. thank you for sharing............10++++++++++(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 4:36:00 AM)

    A sweet comment dear poetess Magadha Rani...thanks a lot. Stay blessed!

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (12/12/2019 11:20:00 PM)

    A great poem with superb imagery.
    A one of a kind poem of love that makes
    the heart flutter and tingles the mind.
    So beautifully conveyed and crafted.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:17:00 AM)

    i profusely appreciate your visits with wonderful comments! Thank you so much....stay happy and blessed!

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (11/26/2019 2:12:00 AM)

    'Your sterling love
    Is like a gigantic sponge
    That absorbs the fountain of my pain' - -Wow...! I love these lines! They tell a thousand things!(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:16:00 AM)

    A great appreciation! Thanks a lot for your interest to put a series of stunning comments on this poem.....stay always happy and blessed!

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (10/16/2019 11:16:00 AM)

    The comparison in the first three lines is wonderful! No matter how much the subject of love is abundant in literature: Love, remains the the most captivating and inspiring emotion!(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:15:00 AM)

    I sincerely appreciate your wonderful review! A million thanks to you for revisiting this short poem of mine!

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  • Anjandev Roy (10/13/2019 9:49:00 AM)

    To withstand violent storms.....brilliantly depicted.anjandev Roy.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:14:00 AM)

    A brilliant remark dear Anjandev! Thank you so much. Stay blessed!

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  • Malvikas Poet ChannelMalvikas Poet Channel (9/7/2019 10:48:00 AM)

    An fantastic writen with emotion of love.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:12:00 AM)

    I appreciate this precise comment dear poet..thank you so much!

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (7/24/2019 1:44:00 PM)

    The most powerful emotion, the very source of life: Love; wonderfully expressed.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 5:11:00 AM)

    The most powerful emotion! A unique comment....appreciated! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting!

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (7/10/2019 11:40:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem of.love that holds us spellbound.
    A one of a kind write that wonderfully paints the power
    of love.
    Brilliantly penned.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(12/13/2019 4:50:00 AM)

    A brilliant comment! i am thankful to you stay blessed!

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  • Jane Campion (7/9/2019 2:19:00 AM)

    We see the strength of love in this poem. A wonderful poem.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(7/10/2019 1:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much dear Jane for the sweet remark! Stay happy and blessed!

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (7/4/2019 6:12:00 PM)

    Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Dillip.(Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain(7/5/2019 12:25:00 AM)

    Your precise comments always motivate me my dear Chinedu! Stay blessed!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2019