Dillip K Swain

Gold Star - 195,681 Points (14 Aug,1969 / Jamphar, Machhagaon)

Love - Poem by Dillip K Swain

Your sterling love
Is like a gigantic sponge
That absorbs the fountain of my pain
Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
To withstand violent storms
Cyclonic waves and all disasters
Prompting me to climb mammoth hills
Sans soreness, pains and perils

It's your pure love
That sparks emotion
For - I dive into the ocean!

Copyright @Poet,25 January,2019

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Love by Dillip K Swain

  • Mihaela Pirjol (7/24/2019 1:44:00 PM)

    The most powerful emotion, the very source of life: Love; wonderfully expressed. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (7/10/2019 11:40:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem of.love that holds us spellbound.
    A one of a kind write that wonderfully paints the power
    of love.
    Brilliantly penned.
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  • (7/9/2019 2:19:00 AM)

    We see the strength of love in this poem. A wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(7/10/2019 1:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much dear Jane for the sweet remark! Stay happy and blessed!

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  • Chinedu Dike (7/4/2019 6:12:00 PM)

    Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Dillip. (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(7/5/2019 12:25:00 AM)

    Your precise comments always motivate me my dear Chinedu! Stay blessed!

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (6/22/2019 12:34:00 AM)

    A superb poem that touches on the power of love.
    So beautifully written.
    The wonderful words used. are like clustered gems
    that embellished the whole write.
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(7/5/2019 12:24:00 AM)

    A brilliant review! I am speechless....God bless you

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  • (6/13/2019 11:39:00 PM)

    Just beautifully crafted. We dive into the ocean with you dear Dillip. (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(6/17/2019 7:55:00 AM)

    Your short and sweet comment encourages me a lot...Thank you so much dear Jane!

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  • (2/8/2019 12:23:00 AM)

    You are very lucky Dillip to have a gigantic sponge to absorb your pains. Beautiful...10 (Report)Reply

    (5/7/2019 4:27:00 AM)

    Your precise comments always inspire me sir! I am grateful to you!

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  • Prabir Gayen (2/5/2019 9:30:00 AM)

    It's your pure love
    That sparks emotion
    For - I dive into the ocean! ...
    Very sweet lines from a pure heart...thanks
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(2/6/2019 4:40:00 AM)

    I value you comments a lot dear Prabir! A million thanks to you! Enjoy poetry....stay blessed and enriched!

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (2/5/2019 8:33:00 AM)

    Love can do the most impossible actions in our life. Things we might think never occur, due to the powers of it, they do. Your poem shows utmost power, Dillip. I constanly enjoy very much your poems, be sure of that. This poem is so magnificent. God's Blessings in Abundance always, Dillip! (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(2/6/2019 4:38:00 AM)

    Your comments are as beautiful as your poems! My gratitude! Stay always happy and blessed dear friend!

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (2/4/2019 1:08:00 AM)

    sterling love is gigantic sponge!

    wonderful imagery

    10+++++
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(2/6/2019 4:37:00 AM)

    A great precise remark my friend! Thanks a lot..........

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  • Bharati Nayak (1/31/2019 12:26:00 PM)

    Your sterling love
    Is like a gigantic sponge
    That absorbs the fountain of my pain
    Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
    To withstand violent storms
    Cyclonic waves and all disasters- - - -A great poem on the power of love, thanks for sharing.
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(2/6/2019 4:35:00 AM)

    A great comment dear Bharati Apa! I am grateful to you! Stay remain happy and blessed!

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  • Valsa George (1/31/2019 6:05:00 AM)

    Love has such magical powers! It gives us the strength to swim over the rising tides of life and fills us with new enthusiasm! Diving in the ocean of love will never make us fatigued! A beautiful poem extolling the power and might of Love! (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/31/2019 7:05:00 AM)

    A great comment dear madam! I am always grateful to you! Stay always happy and blessed!

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (1/25/2019 11:28:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem that captures the power of
    love and the magic that it brings.
    Liked the three closure lines that bring out the
    joy and beauty of pure love
    Beautifully crafted with superb imagery..
    (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/31/2019 7:03:00 AM)

    Your beautiful comments always motivate me! I am thankful to you! Stay remain blessed and enriched!

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  • Poet Poet (1/25/2019 11:00:00 AM)

    i DO HOPE YOU ARE A good swimmer
    I am not
    except I swim in
    LOVE ALONE
    and drown

    good lovers poem
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/31/2019 7:02:00 AM)

    Thank you so much dear fiend for your valuable comment! Stay blessed and enriched!

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (1/25/2019 3:48:00 AM)

    An intensely emotional write on true love and devotion! I love the wonderful imagery with which the poem starts! (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/25/2019 4:06:00 AM)

    Your comments are beautiful, precise and meticulous! I am thankful to you! Stay remain blessed!

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  • (1/25/2019 3:44:00 AM)

    Such an inspirational tribute to love! Romantic. And spiritual. What a joy to read, Dillip! (Report)Reply

    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/25/2019 4:05:00 AM)

    I am delighted to receive your precise comment after a long gap! I am grateful to you my friend!

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/25/2019 3:16:00 AM)

    Wow..10+++
    It's your pure love
    That sparks emotion
    For - I dive into the ocean!
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    Dr Dillip K Swain(1/25/2019 4:04:00 AM)

    A lovely comment my friend! I am thankful to you! Enjoy poetry...enjoy life..stay always happy and blessed!

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/24/2019 10:59:00 PM)

    Your sterling love
    Is like a gigantic sponge
    That absorbs the fountain of my pain
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2019



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