Love Poem by Neyri Castaneda

Love



i still see your face in my dreams
it hurts and it doenst help at all
i still want you in my life as crazy as that seema
i want you to catch me when i fall

i still remeber the first time we met
there was something different about you
your friendship was something i wanted to get
that smile when you said 'hi'

out of nowhere you called me on the phone
iwanted to sit there and talk to you 4ever
you were so new, and so crazy and unknown
i just knew that our friendship would never sever

2 years and we are barely holding it 2gether
what happend to the way this all used to be
i never wanted you out of my life
i sat there for along time pretending not see

we decided to go out and make it all-right
it didnt work out of course..we knew it couldnt
we couldnt even really stand each-others sight
it shouldnt end this way but it did and it shouldnt

i miss you and everything you were to me
ten years from now we will look back on it all
we will older and finally be able to see
that love will stand the test of time and never fall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 03 August 2008

excellent. that last statement is so true. excellent work. keep it up!

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