Love At Once Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love At Once

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Love at once
Saturday,7th December 2019

It echoed constantly
and made impression instantly
"I love you, I love you"
i couldn't believe and wanted to hear through ears

what was she telling?
i thought it is fragrance
coming out from fresh flower
and sending the message very clear

you made it crystal clear
she was not afraid or feared
but neared and sought to hear
with same echo and evoke the response

it was magical
and really wonderful
to know and read your mind
from where else i was to find!

I need to seize the chance
and tell it at once
" I love you " too
and want my boat to pass through

Will you hold my hand?
and stay as lover friend
if yes, i see it as golden chance
to have you at once

Hasmukh Mehta

Love At Once
Saturday, December 7, 2019
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Will you hold my hand? and stay as lover friend if yes, i see it as golden chance to have you at once Hasmukh Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Thiagarajan Sethuraman Thiagarajan Sethuraman Hasmukh Mehta yes I understand 1 Delete or hide this Like · Reply · 5h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Author Hasmukh Mehta It was on the song" I love you" 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 5h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Thiagarajan Sethuraman What a gushing feeling of love longing to clutch the hand close to the chest.It is like fountain of water enthusiasm oozing out from all the pores of the body.Let us embrace and enjoy, Husmukh Mehta 1 Delete or hide this Like · Reply · 5h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

S.r. ChandrslekhaActive Now S.r. Chandrslekha Sweet write. 1 Delete or hide this Like · Reply · 6h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

S.r. Chandrslekha 165 mutual friends

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Virginia Cruz Garcia Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Faith Mwirumubi 3 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Manoj Kumar Panda 51 mutual friends Message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2019

Chandan Deka 51 mutual friends

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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