Monday, March 17, 2014

Love At The 99 Cent Store Comments

Rating: 5.0

I knew today would be another amazing day,
when I entered the parking lot display,

old cracked asphalt teeming with green weeds,
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Chuy Amante
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Sandra Feldman 18 March 2014

I have no words to describe the immensity of this work., I don't know even what to call it for it goes far beyond the normal poetic form. The descriptions and feelings are instantly absorbed So well is it written So well it informs The humor is witty And not uniform You go from straight laughter, to sentiment, torn The old man and family, for example. The Spanish-Mexican vignettes, perfect in all, both languages fit in, never a call. I never have read a work such as this, but I'll read it 99 cents times over, To renew my Bliss. Excuse me, Mr Tripp but you CAN have a.99 cent store, like you had Woolworth's 5 and 10 store..(The cents was left out, because it was understood in the context) So there!

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Chuy Amante 17 March 2014

Ha Ha! Thanks! ! ! Got it Richard! Takes a team to keep me steering straight!

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