At the age of six
He loved her so
And everyday
He'd let her know
'I Love you sunshine
He'd say each day
She just laugh
And run away
Till one day
She turned around
And say with him
On the play ground
'Iam sorry vish
I don't love you
You'll find someone else
Who loves you too.
Highschool camed
They meet again
They laughed about
The things back then
They began to date
And fell in love
He got the girl
That he'd dreamed of
But when college came
Everything changed
They were far apart
With lives rearranged
' we'll be fine sunshine'
But she had a doubt
She turned and said
'It won't work out'
'Iam sorry vish
I can't love you
You' ll find someone else
Who loves you too'
In their twenties
They meet again
They laughed about
the things back then
He took her hand
They began to dance
Remembering
Their old romance
Two years later
She became his wife
They'd be together
All of their life
They went on a drive
When it was no longer light
They drove down the road
Of the starry night
The music came on
She started to sing
He whispered 'sunshine'
You are my everything
But then suddenly
In one big flash
Headlights shone
As their car crashed
He saw her laying
Down on the ground
He felt his tears
Started rolling down
sunshine! ! ! ! ... He cried
She took his hand
'I have to go
please understand'
I love you so much
It's always been true
But you will find someone
Else who loves you too.
'No.... He cried
' it's always been you
I don't want someone else
I only want you '
And there on that Street
Is where he cried
Hugging his love
As she slowly died.
Here is that angel
Who had cried
Writing this poem
Putting his emotions beside.
Flip flops in a rather lovely romantic tale give way to stability but sadly it lasts for a short while and the relationships ends in a tragedy with the death of the beloved after an accident. Very poignant narrative. The poem could have been more engrossing if the presentation was simpler. Instead of going non-stop, the content could have been divided into easy-to-read sentences or phrases. Wishing you all the best. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Twice, so far, i've read Iam where i would use I am or I'm. is this a signature of your poetry? Highschool camed They meet again ............'came' 'met' ............well, ok, i'll ALLOW meet here and a while later as well. and High school. He saw her laying Down on the ground..............i think you want lying. the verbs lie and lay can certainly be confusing. i also have not always been sure which spelling of which verb (tense) to use. many people do not use the correct word! He felt his tears Started rolling down sunshine! ! ! ! ....? ? ? maybe He felt his tears Starting to roll down upon sunshine! ! ! ! ...........? ? Here is that angel Who had cried Writing this poem Putting his emotions beside...............'YOU' are the angel. you died also and then wrote this? ? i think aside rather than beside. unlike the previous commenter, i liked the way you put this together. how could it be simpler and be so informative and entertaining? ? i assume you made this up or have written about others OR you lied to PH about your age (born in 1995) . hee-hee to MyPoemList. would you like to have a poem in my/our monthly showcase, which i put into my poem list on PH. it/they goes/go by month, year, and 'Section'. let me know if you are interested or want more info. bri :) He saw her laying Down on the ground..............i think you want lying. the verbs lie and lay can certainly be confusing. i also have not always been sure which spelling of which verb (tense) to use. many people do not use the correct word! Twice, so far, i've read Iam where i would use I am or I'm. is this a signature of your poetry?