vishal angel sharma


I'm Excellent - Poem by vishal angel sharma

I'm excellent, fabulous,
great as can be!
Astoundingly splendid.
Yes, seriously! I'm wickedly wondrous to such a degree,
That I'm out of this world.
I can see you agree!
Breathtakingly super, a sure guarantee,
There's no one as peachy or first class as me!
Phenomenal homework comes most easily,
So why is last week's marked in red with an 'E'?
Dedicated to sheenu: *
(please don't kill me)

Topic(s) of this poem: happy


Comments about I'm Excellent by vishal angel sharma

  • Bri Edwards (11/30/2016 7:58:00 PM)


    Vishal Is So Shy!

    I hope you have not been killed.....yet,
    'cause this is so humorous! This net-
    work of silliness is so stupendous, BUT...
    , unlike me, it falls a bit short of ME, who is....
    TREMENDOUS!

    it was obviously marked E in order to rhyme with: be, degree, agree, guarantee, me, easily, and (once more) the all-important pronoun in my life [and i think yours]: ME!

    BUT, who is sheenu?


    to MyPoemList

    bri :)
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  • Alice Perfect (11/20/2015 9:11:00 PM)


    hey you followed me around
    and recorded my happy babble

    everything is great!
    Perfect in fact! ! !
    why not shout it?
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  • (11/20/2015 9:10:00 PM)


    Let me guess: Misunderstoody. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015



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