Love Confused Poem by Alen Alexander

Love Confused

Rating: 5.0


chances he uses
power he drains
courage he picks up
but still he's frail

he loves her a lot
but still they're friends
he doesnt want to hurt her
so calls it as an unnecessary trend

the taunting he gets..
the poems he writes
her unknown companionship
jus makes his love ignite

but still with the part
that they're friends
he doesnt want to hurt her
and calls it as an unnecessary trend

she saw some of his lines
and asks to whom it were for
but he laughed it away, says they're made for fun
like taking some shells while sitting by the sea shore

but there was a time
where he couldnt take it anymore
the time came slowly
where he told who his love was for

the incident takes place
when she asked him without moving.. who he was behind..
he says it out..wen his pressure broke..
that she's the girl.. the one of a kind

she asks him what she had to say
but all he said was i dont know
and then it ended up as he expected
with a small and polite No

he continued, heartbroken
saying that he knew it all along
it had been his way of life
to suffer even after hopin and praying after all

she told him to shut up
n that there were still better girls left
then why did he have to
choose only her bereft

without giving an answer.. and his love for her still alive
for her and the still living frndship
he chose to keep it down
for all the comin while

he still loves her a lot
and still they're friends
but since he doesnt want to hurt her
he prays, for either his love or life to end...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 14 September 2009

very emotional poem. so sad but, yet so clever the way both sides are told a bit. he's a secret lover of her and all he want is that one special girl only to find out they don't love you the same way you love them. can relate to this but, life goes on. very good writting. :)

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DaNa XxX 11 June 2009

what a nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! i really liked the last part! ! ! ! ...keep waritting! ^_^

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Crazy Vampire 09 June 2009

nice poem! i have many friends wwho like one another and yet they dont say anything because they are afraid of rejection and of hurting there friend.10+++

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Toni Bellanger 02 June 2009

It was very well put. Especially the last line.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 30 May 2009

is this you? ......i do hope not....otherwise it wudnt be fair for anyone to be subjected to this kinda pain...love hurts.........and u expressed it soo poetically.....pure genius.......good work.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... :)

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