Love Her, But Let Her Be Wild Comments

A RELATIVE? : 'Dana Enache Goodreads Author Born in Constanta, Romania Genre Horror, Fiction, Paranormal Member Since August 2020 edit data Dana Enache writes about monsters, pain, love, loss and grief.'

A relative? ? 'Dana Enache Goodreads Author Born in Constanta, Romania genre Horror, Fiction, Paranormal Member Since August 20Dana Enache writes about monsters, pain, love, loss and grief. She is not your typical horror writer

Love her and respect her freedom of expression. Beautiful poem

OOPS! 'Enache', not Enoche! ! Sorry for misspelling your name. : )

Enoche, 'Romanian poet', welcome, 'New Poet' to PH. I give this poem 5 stars *****. bri : )

(cont.) She....btw, WHO is 'she'..in the poem & last 3 lines? ? ? ? Is she a human? Is she related to me? Do you know her? She sounds like she MIGHT become a great ENTERTAINER, or a great CRIMINAL, 'untamed'.

So, I/we should let 'her' 'be wild', 'dance', 'dream', 'sing', 'explore', 'be herself', & 'be wild' [[AGAIN]]? ? ? (cont.)

This is NOT the type of poem I gravitate to (am attracted to) , but I think a lot of readers will enjoy it. I'd delete the first comma in lines 3 & 7 & 15.

3rd line from poem's ending: ESSENCE: (one definition) 'intrinsic or indispensable quality or qualities that serve to characterize or identify something'