Love In Mind, Sex In Time Poem by Dakota Ellerton

Love In Mind, Sex In Time



His hands on my body
his eyes piercing through me
his mouth on me
why am I doing this
I don't want this
I don't want him
inside me
I feel the pressure
we move together
more and more
his fingers between mine
a little more
then nothing
I look at him
It's not you
who is this?
what did we just do?
why was I thinking about you?
I pull up my pants
I walk away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 03 June 2010

This really made me smile. It is cute though, going to bed with a man you didn't know. Now you know where the phrase 'one night stand' comes from. LOL. I loved reading this, because of how it was written. There are a lot of clear images in these stanzas, especially the last stanza. A 10+++++ thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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