My Father, My Father Poem by Dakota Ellerton

My Father, My Father

Rating: 3.8

My father, my father,
I love he,
my father, my father,
made me see,
how beautiful this world really can be.
My father, my father,
said to me,
my daughter my daughter,
come see me,
I wont be around forever, and i have things that must be.
My father, my father,
dont die on me.

[I wrote this while my father was in the hospital, I'm sorry to say he never got to leave. R.I.P October 7,08.]

Phanice Wamukota 21 June 2015

He rests in peace darling.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2015

This is a beautiful poem expressing the love of a teen aged daughter for her father who is ill, lying on a hospital bed. The feelings are tender and the emotion deep. Well done!

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Emma Adamyan 07 June 2010

only a tender heart of devoted child can create such lovely piece. im proud to share the same date of birthday with such talented poet like u!

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Kelcie Harm 07 June 2010

I too wish i had a relationship like the one you have with your father! You are blessed to be loved & to love someone so strongly.

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lovelt just lovely raven! i wish i could care about my father the way you do... if you read my poem, A Living Statue, it is subtley directed toward him. keep up the great work. -Layla

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