Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Love Is

Nice feeling
With almost willing
Not as fake art
But with emotional start

Think not
And always fought
With the idea of being
Poor or king

Who would want?
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Tuesday, September 2, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Enjoyed this Anthony11 hours ago sweet .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

a poem of always Alan Green 'Guppyman'11 hours ago the poet tells of all of the power of love Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

It's about finding a great love Colbee Minor11 hours ago It has depth and emotion. However, I was thrown off by the flow of the words. I got stuck on the words angle and close. Although, I admit there is a rhythm, or rhyming, to the poem. It is good, but some of the stanzas threw me off as I mentioned before. But most definitely keep up the good work!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

It's about finding a great love Colbee Minor11 hours ago It has depth and emotion. However, I was thrown off by the flow of the words. I got stuck on the words angle and close. Although, I admit there is a rhythm, or rhyming, to the poem. It is good, but some of the stanzas threw me off as I mentioned before. But most definitely keep up the good work!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

nice mike ruthenbeck11 hours ago well done, I enjoyed the simplicity Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Solid in the present... Tracy Bollinger3 hours ago as only true love can do! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Heart felt Barbara Rodgers3 hours ago This is coming from the heart. A love poem at best! Keep on keeping on! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

I swing- - - With love I sing- - Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago A poem expressing power of love in a different style with crucial emotional touch leaving a marked impression! - - - - - Well chosen words with a good rhyming scheme make the poem effective- - - - Great work- - - - -Excellent read- - - - Well done! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Very sweet Mrinmoy Choudhury11 hours ago Emotion of love expressed very nicely - I loved reading reading. Thank you for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Good work Raquel Ruz11 hours ago The juxtaposition of finding strength to admit love. Comment +1 .

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