Love. It's More Than A Word. Poem by Mindy Crummie
Love. It's More Than A Word.
For something so small it has such big feeling, it can make your heart soar as if it has wings.
It's something we feel young or old, most people wait to say it at a time they feel bold.
Some say it's what you feel at first sight while some say thats not true, all I know is i felt it the moment I met you.
At the time we were a 12 yr old boy and a 11 yr old girl, who could have ever guess a few yrs later you'd be my whole world.
My past sometimes was to much for me to bare, yet I would do it all again just for you to be here.
No matter what anyone says in all honesty I don't really care, cause with you my whole life I wish to share.
One word cold never say it all, cause without you Austin my world would be blue.
That just come to she how much I will forever LOVE you.
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4/26/2024 12:18:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
i like it. i think it is nice that you wrote it for your boyfriend. thanks for sharing. i'm glad you did not feel the need to write short lines. a little rhyming is nice. but take a look for some 'errors' in it, including at least two in the following section i copied and pasted below. thanks for sharing. One word cold never say it all, cause without you Austin my world would be blue. That just come to she how much I will forever LOVE you. careful proofreading lets me enjoy poems more, though i confess i still sometimes miss one of my own mistakes.