Love Lastes Forever Poem by La'Kira Jackson

Love Lastes Forever

Rating: 4.0


Since you been gone it haven't been the same,
Now that you're gone I don't like anyone to call your name.

Your love haven't left it's right here in my heart,
Ever since you left my decisions haven't been very smart.

Love lastes forever even though you're gone,
I just close my eyes and vision that you're right here in my home.

You laugh, you jump, you run with joy,
I just wish we could have done it before.

When you leave I'll cry and put my tears in a sack,
Then maybe just maybe one day you'll come back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 03 July 2008

Fine composition! ......well done

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 July 2008

I recommend this because the rhyming was very good and as a result, it was easier to read. It still has a way to go but this writer has some talent displayed already. GW62

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