Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Love Lingers (Where It Will) Comments

Rating: 4.5

simplistic to the point of incomprehensible,
love lingers on the lips and in the heart -
seemingly for but the briefest of moments,
while ever cavorting on the brink of eternity.
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Arnie Hicks
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Savita Tyagi 06 August 2018

Beautiful. All are capable of loving but it is nurtured best by a kind and tender heart.

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Kim Barney 21 November 2014

Well written. Loved the line DEPARTING WHEN IT MUST.

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2014

Love should be embraced whenever it make its entrance, with careful nurturing its bliss could linger even after the death of one partner. If for some reasons it makes its exit, one must brace up ones spirit and move on with life. A well articulated poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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