Love, Obsession And Hatred Comments

(cont.) ..ok, so you mentioned all three key words of the title. GOOD. // specks of hatred tatters your heart..i'd type specks...tatter..., not tatters // to be ware when perhaps to beware when or be aware of when? // charred/marred, very nice! to MyPoemList. bri :)

(continued) .. some suggestions etc.; take them or leave them: You never know, indeed you have committed a sin. i would shorten with you've. hem? as in hemmed in/confined? do the boundaries (the hem) of love dissolve? (continued) ..

love cannot be destroyed; it can only blow away and be transmitted! some interesting thought done her, .....and rhyming. MY 'love' has been transmitted several times, from girl to woman to woman, and on and on and on. BUT there is a second love i have..........for ice cream. a little sometimes blows towards cake, but most of it is devoted to ice cream, and never leaves. (continued) ..

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A nice poetic imagination, Jaya. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

your poetry is good but with age you will come to know what now i say read it please Love, combine and differentiate with LUST hatred INNER dimension of jealous as it bursts and obsession, ==EGO NARCISSISM and see the difference compose anther one Jaya my younger poet kid for me may be gc