Love On The Rocks. Poem by Fay Slimm

Love On The Rocks.

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Inward.
The floods of salty stress
whirlpool themselves
into loneliness,

which submerges me.


Outward.
The pantomime carries on
role-modeling you
as a paragon,

which amuses me.

Fay Slimm
Saturday, January 30, 2010
poem poems Loneliness
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C. P. Sharma 04 February 2010

Submerging in love brings eternal smile. CP

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Ian Bowen 30 January 2010

Fay, well composed piece of work. Regards, Ian

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