Love Poetry - A Simple Kiss Poem by Kieran J1996

Love Poetry - A Simple Kiss

Rating: 4.3


When i kissed her earlier, it felt nice,
I noticed she smelt faintly of spice,
As my mouth found her lips,
She held me tightly at the hips,
When she, pulled away,
I knew ther would be more, later that day,

When he kissed me, my heart skipped a beat,
And my smiling face, grew red with heat,
I held his hips,
While he kissed my lips,
I knew he, wanted more,
At this my heart leapt and soared,

I left her, with a peck on the cheek,
Knowing that, another she would seek,
I love her, i truly do,
Just look at her eyes, that dazzling blue,
I never thought, i'd find 'The One',
I thought it all just a con,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Simply sweet! lovely from start to finish! Loved It; D

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Silly Artist 07 June 2010

Its sweet and kind. But the last two verses makes it funny: P

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Krystyna Kerperien 25 May 2010

wow! i love it and dam you have really good poems!

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Crazy Vampire 18 May 2010

really good! it is so sweet! i love it! ^-^

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Emily Oldham 17 May 2010

sweet ode, truly the simplicity of love :)

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