In a raging tempest
your ocean's waves
crash against the barren rocks of my soul.
As I breathe you in
I'm soaked into your being,
And then you slip away.
Time and time again
this violent cleansing
that I do so adore
softens the jagged edges of my suffering.
With each thundering blow then ebbing flow
a little more of me is drawn away.
Until nothing of me remains
but that which swirls
amidst the loving arms of your embrace.
'' In a raging tempest your ocean's waves crash against the barren rocks of my soul. '' - fantastic imagery! This poem is intense, urgent, ardent.....a cascade of emotions through each line! Lovely!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What beautiful visuals you paint here with your words, so vivid, so real, I can almost feel the waves crashing against me, great write, excellent read. Annette