Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Love – The Last Thought On My Mind Comments

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When my time has come and my end I find
You will be the last thought on my mind
Your soft caress in love’s embrace
Will be the last I remember of this world’s grace
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Paul Warren
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Lyn Paul 28 October 2015

Beautiful words. You have captured true love and content with this poem. Thank You

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 October 2015

Splendid. True love has the power of even merging the identity of a lover with that of his beloved. In such case it is but natural that the thought of beloved and her love would be always there, even up to the last breath. Enjoyed the emotional out break in the love poem. Thanks for sharing.10+

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