Weldon Davis

Silver Star - 3,969 Points (8-16-80 / Fayetteville NC USA)

Love Thought Train - Poem by Weldon Davis

This philosophical love leads to profound realism
Intensified by nights spent in this prison
Every instant I'm away from you
My deepest love is in limbo
Make no mistake about it...

Loving you is complete freedom
Loving you is the personification of my truest self
(In layman's terms)
Loving you comes naturally

Loving you is a mirror or echo
Of all the reasons
I love myself
I see your beauty, and in appreciation of that beauty
I realize that I myself am beautiful

I know your insecurities
Have no fear
I see past your flaws
I love you for what is most important
Your character

You are the love of my life
No matter how far you feel you've fell
I will always catch you
Simply cause you get me
The very essence of who I am

Topic(s) of this poem: insight, love, relationships

Comments about Love Thought Train by Weldon Davis

  • (1/24/2016 12:10:00 AM)

    Absolutely articulate and beautiful poem of love, could feel it throughout your poem. Such eloquent passion beneath the surface giving this poem an effervescent illumination into philosophical love, yet reality standing there so preciously tender. Just love this poem's essence, Weldon. Give it 10 - 10''s if I could. Going on my favorite poem list and if you don't mind my poet list also. Magnificent portrait of love in your words. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Weldon Davis (1/25/2016 7:06:00 PM)

    Roseann thank you for your kind words and critique of my poem..I also see that you commented on my Forever poem as well...Since you like both of those poems you should check out Returnity which falls somewhat into the same gist...Also I would be a fool not to want you to add me to your fav poets list! ! ..I'm honored, and thankful that you would do so...All of these poems were written in a three year span, and now I'm almost caught up and will have to go to the trusty old pad and scratch out some more thoughts and feelings hahaha...Once again thank you for reading..Much appreciated :)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 22, 2016

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