Love War Zone Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

Love War Zone

Rating: 5.0


Make love not peace
make it aggressive
fight for it
lay not down your arms
be responsive
have no qualms
to capture
that, that is elusive
no quarter to give
a battle to endure
when it calms
regroup
no, not love soup
a definitive
two sides
coming together
not war of the worlds
just those swirls
of war and peace
and making love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 21 March 2010

Obtusely written, as always, GBBS. But I like this not-run-of-the-mill type of poem. Far more interesting that being straight-forward. Keep it up. PS I gave you top marks.... Fran xxx

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