Love War Zone Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

Love War Zone

Rating: 5.0


Make love not peace
make it aggressive
fight for it
lay not down your arms
be responsive
have no qualms
to capture
that, that is elusive
no quarter to give
a battle to endure
when it calms
regroup
no, not love soup
a definitive
two sides
coming together
not war of the worlds
just those swirls
of war and peace
and making love.

Saturday, February 27, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: aggressive,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 21 March 2010

Obtusely written, as always, GBBS. But I like this not-run-of-the-mill type of poem. Far more interesting that being straight-forward. Keep it up. PS I gave you top marks.... Fran xxx

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