Love, hallowed was your name
Before mankind deformed it
Now they use your name in such vain
I think they have destroyed it
What once was a promise, true and pure
Mankind twisted its meaning to suit their destructive needs
Its original meaning lost forevermore
This was done to cloak their evil deeds
Before you brought us unmeasured happiness
But now you sow only misery
They contaminated you in their recklessness
Now you devastate us unmercifully
If only we could go back and change
And what mankind have corrupted
Would our land be so deranged?
Or could your joy again reign undisputed?
Now we live in a dark territory
That is untouched by your grace
This desolate land that lays before me
Is why mankind will never see Gods true face
This is so real it gave me chills, it speaks to your heart and tug at our wrong doings very nice james many thanks Asia
wow that last line got me..! i'm speechless Tyrone great write.~Love Eva
Tyrone this poem, It speaks to me. I think you hit the nail on the head when you wrote this. Keep listening to that muse. Ashley
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, our poems do somewhat parallel each other. You said my poems were nice, I don't know this one is extremely good.10.