Tell me how was your day
Since I could not see.
Tell me how you went your way,
As if you don't remember me.
Tell me how your boyfriend ignores you,
As my jealousy is plain to see.
Tell me how he yells at you too,
But can I ask if you remember me?
Tell me how you two kiss,
Even though I didn't get one
Tell me how he answered your wish,
Do you remember that with you I was never done?
Tell me everything you do,
And I promise to listen intently,
Act as if I never loved you,
But i will ask you one question, Do you remember me
thats a question i would to ask my first love. im sure everyone does... good work keep writing :)
my heart was pounding when i read this one...wow ur really great! ~love Hazel
This is very well writen. Add like a story to it and it could be a narrative which im told can lead to some pretty great songs. :) Keep writing! Ashley
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is deep....keep up the work ur very talented.