Lovely Queen Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Lovely Queen
Oh, dear queen
I was very keen
To see and hold
And feel whole world
From day one
I have none
In life as you are only one
Beloved and longed one
I was getting signal
Upon its arrival
With sweet message
As if written on golden page
This was unique
It did not strike
I thought it may simple hissing voice
But you proved it with promise
Yes I feel the depth
That shall remind me till death
You feeling as queen
I had had never seen
Flowers play no part
Eyes make no effort to depart
Your sweet presence make it difference
I shall love your presence
Stay fine as ever
I shall forget you never
You were always near and stayed
I have always wanted and prayed
Moving and eloquent David Soule2 minutes ago To me, its is almost as if the author or the subject is envious of this bird and that this bird is the subjects true love, it seems that the last two verses He loves the bird for its wings that take it to places really far its almost in the subjects mind but still he blind and complacent.
- The queen remains ever in the mind. And the stress on the end rhyme- a beauty for the poem indeed. UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Feb 26,2014 - - - - - - -
Great Awasum Terrence3 minutes ago Well done Comment +1
Love's labour lost.Good poem Shantanu Chindhade3 minutes ago Neatly woven love story with sad ending thus taking to certain height.Good poem, Shantanu chindhade Comment +1
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Oh, dear queen I was very keen