Saturday, December 6, 2014

Lover's Epitaph Comments

Rating: 5.0

The burning sun,
Hanging high in the sky,
Still the gravestone soddens,
With the tears from her eyes,
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Aditya Raj Verma
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 September 2019

Death took his way to the lover, And put him to sleep forever, We buried him but unaware was she, Epitaph said, 'Love but never loved was he'. sadness linger in lines...... love, wishes......... the whole life is a journey to get a little bit of love. a very fine poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Aditya Raj. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 06 December 2014

A narrative love poem well articulated and beautifully penned. Within the bliss of love, sometimes lays tragedy. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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