Monday, August 7, 2006

Lover's Leap Comments

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He has already reached and stopped at his mental age.
She is passing at his cottage in her menopause.
But they are still fresh lovers.
He likes a huge leafless tree who desperately looking for rain.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 12 August 2006

Very pulling at the heart, a superb write, Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 07 August 2006

Two very fragile, and sad human beings. Edward Young said it best, 'Like our shadows, our wishes lengthen as our sun declines.'.Very poignant write, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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David Tanguay 07 August 2006

I read this poem over and over again. I can't make out what your trying to convey.

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