Loving Feeling Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Loving Feeling



The Loving Feeling
This is page 99 the way my wife and I sleep
and during the night when I half wake up pat
her side of the duvet to be sure that I’m not
reduced to a lonely 9.

There times when she can’t hear my breaths
she shakes me and ask me a daft question and
I know why, it is good to be loved, she to dislike
the idea of waking up alone in a bedroom.

We do bicker during the day, she doesn’t like me
driving around in my scooter, I think she spends
too much time doing housework and re- arranging
which makes me fall on a strange object in the night?

Love is at time irritating we worried too much about
the one we love and I get annoyed if she badgers me,
but come bedtime we are friends again, and hope we
both will be there in the morning

Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2015

Love is at time irritating we worried too much about the one we love and I get annoyed if she badgers me, but come bedtime we are friends again, and hope we both will be there in the morning Liked and enjoyed this beautiful poem.

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