<3impatience≪3 Poem by robin serdynski

<3impatience≪3

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when im alone away from friend and family
im very sad but with friends and family im glad
when im waiting 4 u 2 call im mad cause i know im sad
and i dont know when i can hear u again
so hurry and call so i can hear your sweet voice again
and so when im waiting 4 u to call
i have good friends 2 help me through it all
but when they are in trouble or cant talk
i get so scared and sad that i cant wait 2 talk 2 yew
when u call or i call you i get so happy i cant fall
and so excited 2 hear ur sweet voice again
so when its time 4 me to go or yew
i never wanna let u go
i love you with all my heart
i know how u feel 4 me
i hope we will last 4 eternity
and every time i wait 2 talk 2 yew
i know i have very good friends 2 help me though it
i love u all with all my heart and i know that u guys
feel bad when i cut myself dont get mad its just
how i release the pain i feel of waiting
thank you all 4 all u've done 4 me
im glad i met u all and ur all good friends
and when i think of u guys i smile and feel joy and happiness
so thank u all love u all with all my heart so thank u and
god bless all my freinds and famliy(u guys are the best! ! ! thank you :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 06 February 2010

Nice try..could have been more better. Keep writing! ! :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 06 February 2010

Nice try..could have been more better. Keep writing! ! :)

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Martin Riddick 09 February 2010

well wrote u love your friends and family alot as i can see

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Fred Babbin 09 February 2010

I guess this is a poem in the modernist style. But it would help if you could spell.

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Subbaraman N V 04 January 2011

Through this site! Yes; it is great!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 February 2010

simply beautiful, i do appreciate....,10+++. thanks for sharing

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Riches is about real relationships. Thanks for sharing this important perspective my friend.

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Zechariah Houchins 18 February 2010

I like youre poem robin ^_^

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Alexias Ware 09 February 2010

iLiK3 UR PoEM...iTS V3RY NiC3...

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