robin serdynski

Rookie (11-26-1993 / mawlukkee)

It Ok 2 Cry When U Have Good Friends - Poem by robin serdynski

u helped me when I'm down your there when i happy your there. when it's the worse your there when it's the best. your there when i feel crazy and when i am down u say it's OK let it out. u say it wont last forever and it's OK to cry. and when i am at the worst and want to cut myself u are there telling me there's no point in cutting yourself in the long run the pain will still be therefor a while and u still be up set and I'm glade u guys are my friends to be through the happiness and the sadness through the best and worse that what i call true friends that will be with u forever no matter what i know i have true friends that say when i need them they will help me through the worst of it all so open your heart to your true friends and they will be with u trough it all. love your friends and believe in them and your true friends wont let u have good friends and be happy and they will do the same.

Comments about It Ok 2 Cry When U Have Good Friends by robin serdynski

  • (5/22/2010 11:17:00 AM)

    good poem, good to have good friends who we can turn to in time of need, ever if it`s just a shoulder: 0) (Report) Reply

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  • Kumud Ranjan (4/23/2010 1:09:00 PM)

    you write very original..straight from change...
    cutely written...very appreciable..keep writing
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  • (4/23/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    this was a great message of importance brought to u by.......robin serdynski (: (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (3/15/2010 11:19:00 PM)

    oh quite passionate feelings needing graces of friends, inspirational too, well crafted but with little grammatical jumble, keep it up...., thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (2/18/2010 5:50:00 PM)

    I like this poem too im glad oyure my best friend robin ^_^ (Report) Reply

  • Abby Keen/harris (2/9/2010 6:31:00 PM)

    Love it! im so proud of you: D anyways and all u other people who commented on this girl is one of my real friends so thank you 4 encouraging her. love u flippers -hugs- (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2010 6:08:00 PM)

    Great ideas, it's a wonderful poem with a lot of potential.
    Try separating the lines instead of running the lines across the entire page, look at some other poems and you'll see what I mean. And pay attention to your grammar, capitalize the beginning of sentences and use full words. Those things will make your poems look more professional and easier to read.
    Keep it up you're doing good!
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/7/2010 12:05:00 PM)

    Good friends are one of the best gifts in the world. Thanks for sharing my friend. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2010 2:26:00 PM)

    Not bad for a first it shows potential I'll be awaiting further work from u (Report) Reply

  • Twisted Strange (1/30/2010 11:22:00 AM)

    This poem if very interesting. I love the way you dictated everything to friends. It has a good meaning. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2010 10:59:00 AM)

    Really a nice dedication to friends...hey you wrote it really well. Best wishes for your journey ahead :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 23, 2011

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