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I went outside in the cool air
Grateful for the breeze that said I was alive
And able to praise everything and rejoice in everything,
Happy as a lark to join every creature laughing at dawn
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Uriah, This is a wonderful poem. I love the laidbackness of it both in the manner that your have composed it and the narrative. The images of the dogs (dogs are great poetic subjects) are just great and the skill in the use of the word ‘wagging’ is a masterstroke. This has a feel-good aspect to it, but not in an English – Comedy - Movie –of - the -year sort of way, this is intelligently put together and provokes both entertainment and appreciation.
Your spirit shines through this pretty pastoral piece about life and love and ordinary moments of transformation. Glorious penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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12/23/2025 10:41:20 PM # 1.0.0
As positive as sunshine itself. A lovely write, Uriah. For you, may the magic never end. Warmest regards, Sandra