Friday, April 5, 2019

Make To-Days Look Like Trips To Mall Comments

Rating: 5.0

If desert's dry sands stretch all life,
Sail across the sea, take a stroll.
If joys flood, pockets prone to spill,
Recall sorrows, some grief and gall.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 05 April 2019

Long miles to make and falling short, Try stretching limits, small and tall..../// well expressed

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 April 2019

Ghazals originally were in Urdu, then in Hindi, and now a days I see them in Gujarati. It is hard to use English as the medium for this genre. I would be thankful if you or any other reader have any comments on this. Meanwhile thanks for liking this Ghazal, Mahtab Bangalee.

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