Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 698,713 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Man In Street - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Man in street

It hurts most
When caused by the dost* friend
Who remained so close?
And struck most on chosen time

It is on expected line
And all legend stories reveal same
If you trust more on relatives
They will hurt most and behave irresponsibly

So far you were confident
And remained so at present
But they delivered lethal blow
And everything was disallowed

You thought it is too late
When it sealed your fate
You were taken of everything
The empire crumbled like anything

So you got third sense
Your theory exploded and made you tense
The time had acted in your disfavor
You are now considered as man in street or beggar

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2016 7:45:00 PM)

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    x welcome sunita.. nice to receive.. pleasure Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now · Edited
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2016 7:44:00 PM)

    xSunila Kamal Yes, sometimes your own people hurt you the most... a sad truth.. Nicely penned.. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2016 11:20:00 AM)

    So you got third sense
    Your theory exploded and made you tense
    The time had acted in your disfavor
    You are now considered as man in street or beggar
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 4, 2016


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