Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Mannequin And A Pauper Comments

Rating: 4.8

This nonchalant beggar who loves a model queen
in a showcase.
When his till is full of coins
he just heads for an isolated pub
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 23 May 2006

A street person with a dream that is more than food and drink to him. This poem definately has a soul. There are some tears in this one. Very appropriate to the creative process. Lovely work, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Jerry Hughes 23 May 2006

Wonderfully poignant metaphors, Nimal. Obviously your heart bleeds like mine as to what's happening in your beautiful homeland...

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Ballerina With Fins 23 May 2006

Beautiful poem; I really enjoyed it. Mannequin and a pauper; paradox. Such is the irony of love, the forbidden fruit. BWF.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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