If girls stop smiling
At the malls on Saturday,
If beautiful cats on porches
And window sills
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I would remove the word beautiful and I think it would be the perfect poem/mantra. Thanks for the wordly experience.
I really like your poetry. This is great. I loved the cat lines....Really good writing!
I admired this very much indeed. You have learned much from your studies and practices. Disappoints the reader's expectations beautifully.