Mantra Of Gratitude Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Mantra Of Gratitude

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If girls stop smiling
At the malls on Saturday,
If beautiful cats on porches
And window sills
Suddenly disappear,
If orchestral music is never heard again
In concert halls among special friends,
If someone removes
My lovely Emily Dickinson;
Then I’ll sit down quite calmly
And peacefully meditate a mantra of gratitude
For the amount of time I knew these things.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will Barber 12 July 2006

I admired this very much indeed. You have learned much from your studies and practices. Disappoints the reader's expectations beautifully.

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Sue Ann Simar 18 May 2006

I would remove the word beautiful and I think it would be the perfect poem/mantra. Thanks for the wordly experience.

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I really like your poetry. This is great. I loved the cat lines....Really good writing!

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