Mask And Fuse Poem by Michael Ó Domhnaill

Mask And Fuse

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Mask and Fuse



I've seen the soulless mask of a man

reveals nothing underneath.



I've seen apathetic lovers laugh

at what they label hyperbole.

I cried solitary, in grief.



In dusk leaden cloakrooms

my pleasure was demanded on a plate.



Its absence and early morning extortion

flattened and straightened my fate. But for...



a narrow crevice where I must twist "bemused",

At its end a chaotic bitching mechanism

Where I must kiss the fuse.

Mask And Fuse
Sunday, November 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 December 2019

i find (Googling) 3 definitions for " soulless" ; i wonder which to choose. " dusk leaden" or " laden" ? I HOPE there is symbolism here! ! ! that might explain my lack of understanding. But the flow is good for me, there is decent rhyming, and the illustration is provocative. bri :)

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