Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Master, I Would Like To See That Mountain Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember the old happy days
But nowadays really a catastrophe
As I haven't seen a bird, butterfly or a flower at all.
Someone has snatched my precious spring.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 30 October 2009

An uplifting poem that brings tears to the eyes of the reader. Despite the difficulties of age and infirmity the soul remembers 'happy days' and the mountain of hope. May your lungs fill again and your eyes fly with butterflies. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ency Bearis 30 October 2009

A beautiful insightful metaphor that touched my heart and can touch anybody when they read this poem. Its a great composition and presented well.....10

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Sandra Fowler 29 October 2009

Very poignant and very beautiful. May your prayer be granted, Nimal. This one touched me. Warm wishes, Sandra

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