May Be Somewhere In Israel Poem by Liza Sud

May Be Somewhere In Israel

May be somewhere in Israel
you are reading and reading my poems.
And here I am also reading them.
And we are joined in one as a rose.

Noone ever could have agreed
that so far of an age and in distance
we would find something almost the same
in our views, revelations, love instance.

The hand touches one and the same book,
and our souls touch one and the same lines
And God ties Himself with me and you,
and He half-opened Himself to us.

When you let all saint wishes of friends
to come into your stare, inside -
then the worlds blossoms out like a Rose.
you get that world is your Eden Park.

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Может быть, где-то там, в Израиле,
ты читаешь мои стихи,
И я здесь тоже их читаю,
как в одну розу - мы сплетены.

И никто б никогда согласиться не смог:
столь неравные, так далеки -
мы бы били друг другу подобные,
в откровениях, взглядах, любви.

К одной книге рука прикасается -
к одинаковым души - словам,
и мы с Богом соединяемся,
И Господь приоткрыл Себя нам.

И когда ты впускаешь в свой взгляд
все святые желанья товарищей -
то как Роза - весь мир распускается,
и мир видишь, как собственный Сад.

Thursday, October 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 21 October 2016

This poem is beautifully crafted: the four line Russian stanza contains your message so well, each one expresses a portion of your message and also advances the poem to its next part. And what is the message? You are imagining you and Michael Laitman are both reading your poems and this common reading transcends the space that divides you. I wrote you a poem - NEXUS - in which I imagine us reading the same book and feeling the common reading conquers distance.

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