Monday, June 16, 2008

May I..? Comments

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I watch you
through the window

tilt the heavy
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 16 June 2008

I read these lines where 'clouds seem to hang as if drying'.. and also the sun and the wet fresh Irish air. Lovely lines!

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Scarlett Treat 16 June 2008

Only you could take a Wash-a-day Monday and make a beautiful love poem from it. Laughing to the music of us....is a perfect line.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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