May I Have Unconditional Love With You. By Ray Subrata Poem by Subrata Ray

May I Have Unconditional Love With You. By Ray Subrata

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The Beauty blazer buzzes,
She spreads her eye to the brim,
And walls me with her vigilance,
An ever attention she urges,
For she wishes to set a bridge.

Unspoken conditions erect heads,
As parasite round a tender plant,
The secret sacred wishes a grant.

My wild senses, seek relief,
Like an unbridled sea horse,
But she be the Neptune tames me,
And I lose all my power to cross.

If I were she, and she be me,
Then had I had not the same hang,
For a secured boat with notified rank,
The unwritten treaty of each other’s realm!

Saturday, June 11, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: horse,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Subrata Ray

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