Saturday, November 19, 2005

Maybe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Maybe she’ll say yes
Maybe she cares too
Maybe she’s as shy as me
Maybe this is true
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Darren R
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 19 November 2005

I believe your question marks identify as well as qualify the title chosen for your poem...'Maybe' Perhaps if you had entitled it 'Maybe Not' I would have a different point of view. Very nice poem. Congratualtions...and extended welcome as well. L

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Sallie Howson 19 November 2005

maybe you don't need the question marks....fun poem though

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