Me Poem by Aanchal Chugh

Me



Act like nothing is wrong,
Pretend there is no pain behind this mysterious song.
People are clueless,
But I feel like shoelaces that are shoe less.
The pain in my eyes...
When will everybody realize...
I've been told to keep my head up high,
And one day a bird will come to me and ask me how to fly...
With that idea,
I can get by.
For my personality declares that I am shy.
All I can do is sigh...
And maybe even...say goodbye?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 13 July 2009

No need to say goodbye you dont need wings to fly open your mind and ask for more you shall see yourself soar see your spirit in sunshine gleam there is a fruition of all your dreams...keep writing. read my poem called MY DREAM and LETS DREAM

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Jessay Lloyd 05 December 2008

keep writing you'll go far there very good x

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Letna Davis 03 December 2008

I LOVE TO ANALYZE POETRY, TRY TO GET IN THE WRITERS HEAD, TELL ME IF I'M CORRECT. NO ONE SEES WHAT YOU'RE GOING THROUGH, AND EVEN THOUGH AFRAID YOU STILL HAVE HOPE, AND I DON'T BELIEVE YOU'RE SHY, JUST NEED AN OPENING. (NICE BY THE WAY)

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Aanchal, I love youthful poetry, it has so much freedom of thought. Be strong, head up, shoulders back, be positive in thought and deed! Give someone a hug and a smile today...the shyness will take a back seat. Please read my poem, 'In Me'. Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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R.k Das 02 December 2008

given your tender age this is a nice poem, nice optimistic thoughts.

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