Saturday, June 28, 2014

Me And Moon Unto Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me and Moon unto heaven
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The day did depart
And twilight did alight
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 21 July 2014

beautiful write..like it..............

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Abhipsa Tripathy 03 July 2014

Wow! very nice words are used here to describe a beautiful moonlight evening.An amazing poem.

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Valsa George 30 June 2014

This is just lovely... Deepak! You have described a mesmerizing evening giving way to a moonlit night! I envy 'the company divine'! A 10

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 June 2014

Fantastic flow of words...Beautiful imagery of words leading to heaven with beautiful moon along... In a company divine Unto heaven as if Upon a chariot of wine Of pleasures And leisures to dine.. Beautiful captivating lines..Loved reading each lines...

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Nature it is a source of happiness around us and this poem is also very beautiful.

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