Carsten Thomsen

Me, Too Good For You - Poem by Carsten Thomsen

You're too good for me
You deserve someone better
She told me again
Breaking up
My World
For the last
And I looked back
On myself
And realize
With shame
I was to blame
For my
And love
When obviously
All you needed
All along
Was a fat lip
And a kick in your
Skinny ass

Things that bleed
For days
Without dying

Comments about Me, Too Good For You by Carsten Thomsen

  • (10/25/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    Your expressions capture the emotions felt after a breakup well. Replaying the events, rewinding to the spot where you began to blame yourself for somone elses actions. Thank for sharing. I've also heard a similar quote about bleeding for a week w/o dying. Perhaps this was your inspiration? I must say though that women can be trusted. The use of the term never does add intensity to the poem though. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 2, 2012

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