Dodging Bullets Poem by Carsten Thomsen

Dodging Bullets

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Dodging bullets
gathering speed
get over or rid of
the things that I need

Sliding down the
pavement of
one-way streets

From the ashes
From the cross
Against traffic
Against all odds

It feeds
It breathes
No longer needs



YOU

Carsten Thomsen
Tuesday, November 1, 2005
poem poems Ashes
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Roong S 23 July 2012

nice flow..keep writing!

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Liz Munro 01 November 2005

nice build up to the final stanza. liz

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