Braindead Poem by Carsten Thomsen

Braindead

Rating: 5.0


It could have been me
There
On life support

Bruised
Broken
boned
Bedritten
Bandaged
&
Braindead

Fractured skull leaking
Glassy eyes seeing
nothing
Darth Wader Breathing
Monotonously
Unreal

They tell me
Hard
Hard
Hard
Decicion
Has been taken

They will plug you
Permanently
Off
At 5
This evening

I sit here
Smoking
Writing
To keep calm
While your son
Asks for you

Outside
The world continues
Spinning
And the living
Keep on living

Tuesday, October 10, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: smoking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roong S 24 July 2012

Wow..Very good write..! !

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Pheko Motaung 06 February 2012

Intoxicating! Magnificent! A true masterpiece.Thanks a lot.

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Jerry Buckley 26 January 2012

Darth Vader... back at you... good stuff

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Sajna Kailas 13 November 2011

amazing! ! ! very impressive and inspiring poem. good work.keep it up and God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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