Meditation In Nineteen Words Poem by Paul Hartal

Meditation In Nineteen Words

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The fire can't burn
troubling thoughts
to ashes.

But focusing on the flames
can relieve the burden
of thinking.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Cox 01 February 2013

There is a world of truth to what you share. There is something peaceful about sitting and starring into the flames of a fire, be it a campfire or fireplace, which I have always loved and found relaxing. A great and ingenious use of 19 words. I couldn't do it, as I am a babbler at heart...Thank you for sharing...Great poem...Great message...

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